afrexai-conversion-copywriting

What this skill does

# Conversion Copywriting Engine

> Copy is salesmanship in print. This isn't about writing — it's about selling. Every word earns its place or gets cut.

## Quick Health Check

Rate the copy 1-5 on each dimension. Score < 24 = rewrite needed:

| # | Dimension | Question |
|---|-----------|----------|
| 1 | Clarity | Can a 12-year-old understand the offer in 5 seconds? |
| 2 | Specificity | Are there numbers, timeframes, and concrete outcomes? |
| 3 | Desire | Does the reader WANT the outcome described? |
| 4 | Proof | Is there evidence (testimonials, data, logos, case studies)? |
| 5 | Urgency | Is there a reason to act NOW vs later? |
| 6 | Friction | Are objections addressed before they arise? |
| 7 | Voice | Does it sound like a human, not a corporation? |
| 8 | CTA | Is the next step crystal clear and low-risk? |

**Score: /40** — Below 32 = significant opportunity. Below 24 = copy is actively losing money.

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## Phase 1: Research Before Writing

Never write a single word until you complete this. Bad research = bad copy, no matter how clever.

### 1.1 Voice of Customer (VoC) Mining

The goal: steal your customer's EXACT words and mirror them back.

**Sources (ranked by value):**

| Source | What to Extract | Where to Find |
|--------|----------------|---------------|
| Support tickets | Pain language, frustration words | Helpdesk, Intercom, Zendesk |
| Sales call recordings | Objections, "I wish...", buying triggers | Gong, call notes |
| Review sites | Praise patterns, complaint patterns | G2, Capterra, Trustpilot, Amazon |
| Reddit/forums | Unfiltered problems, slang, emotional language | r/[industry], Quora, niche forums |
| Competitor reviews | What competitors fail at (your opportunity) | G2, App Store, Amazon |
| Survey responses | Direct answers to "why did you buy/not buy?" | Typeform, post-purchase surveys |
| Social comments | Reaction language, share triggers | Twitter replies, LinkedIn comments |

**VoC Extraction Template:**

```yaml
voC_research:
  product: "[Product name]"
  date: "YYYY-MM-DD"
  
  pain_statements:  # Exact quotes about the problem
    - quote: "I spend 3 hours every morning just reconciling invoices"
      source: "G2 review - AccountingSoft competitor"
      frequency: "high"  # How often this sentiment appears
    - quote: ""
      source: ""
      frequency: ""
  
  desire_statements:  # What they WANT (outcome language)
    - quote: "I just want to click one button and have it done"
      source: "Reddit r/smallbusiness"
      frequency: "medium"
    - quote: ""
      source: ""
      frequency: ""
  
  objection_statements:  # Why they hesitate
    - quote: "Every tool like this requires a PhD to set up"
      source: "Support ticket"
      frequency: "high"
    - quote: ""
      source: ""
      frequency: ""
  
  trigger_events:  # What made them start looking
    - "Hired 5th employee and spreadsheets broke"
    - "Missed a tax deadline"
    - ""
  
  words_they_use:  # Industry/audience vocabulary
    - "reconciliation" not "financial harmonization"
    - "setup" not "onboarding flow"
    - ""
  
  competitors_they_mention: []
  
  buying_criteria:  # What matters most (ranked)
    - "Easy to set up (< 1 hour)"
    - "Integrates with QuickBooks"
    - ""
```

### 1.2 Awareness Levels (Eugene Schwartz)

Every piece of copy must match the reader's awareness level. Writing "Buy now!" to someone who doesn't know they have a problem = wasted words.

| Level | They Know... | Your Job | Lead With |
|-------|-------------|----------|-----------|
| **Unaware** | Nothing about the problem | Educate about the pain | Story, shocking stat, question |
| **Problem-Aware** | They have a problem | Agitate the pain, introduce solution category | "Tired of X? Here's why..." |
| **Solution-Aware** | Solutions exist | Differentiate YOUR solution | "Unlike other tools, we..." |
| **Product-Aware** | Your product exists | Overcome objections, prove value | Social proof, comparison, demo |
| **Most Aware** | Your product, ready to buy | Remove final friction | Deal, guarantee, urgency |

**Rule:** The less aware they are, the longer the copy needs to be. Unaware = long-form education. Most Aware = short CTA + offer.

### 1.3 One Reader, One Offer, One Action

Before writing, fill this in:

```yaml
copy_brief:
  surface: ""  # Landing page, email, ad, sales page, etc.
  one_reader: ""  # Specific person (not "small businesses" — "Sarah, ops manager at 50-person agency")
  awareness_level: ""  # Unaware / Problem / Solution / Product / Most Aware
  one_offer: ""  # What exactly are you offering?
  one_action: ""  # What exactly should they DO?
  primary_emotion: ""  # Fear, desire, curiosity, frustration, hope
  proof_available: []  # Testimonials, case studies, data points you can use
  objections_to_address: []  # Top 3 reasons they'd say no
  word_count_target: ""  # Constraint forces clarity
```

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## Phase 2: Headline Writing

The headline does 80% of the work. If the headline fails, nothing else matters.

### 2.1 Headline Formulas (12 Proven Patterns)

| # | Formula | Example |
|---|---------|---------|
| 1 | **[Number] Ways to [Desired Outcome] Without [Pain]** | "7 Ways to Cut Hiring Time Without Lowering Standards" |
| 2 | **How [Specific Person] [Achieved Result] in [Timeframe]** | "How a 3-Person Agency Landed $240K in Clients in 90 Days" |
| 3 | **Stop [Bad Thing]. Start [Good Thing].** | "Stop Guessing at Pricing. Start Charging What You're Worth." |
| 4 | **The [Adjective] Way to [Outcome]** | "The Lazy Way to Write Emails That Get Replies" |
| 5 | **[Outcome] in [Timeframe] — or [Bold Guarantee]** | "Double Your Pipeline in 30 Days — or We Work Free Until You Do" |
| 6 | **Why [Counterintuitive Claim]** | "Why Your Best Salesperson Is Costing You Revenue" |
| 7 | **[Pain Statement] → [Outcome Statement]** | "From 60-Hour Weeks → Automated Operations in 14 Days" |
| 8 | **What [Respected Group] Knows About [Topic] That You Don't** | "What Top 1% of SaaS Founders Know About Pricing" |
| 9 | **Are You Making These [Number] [Mistake Type] Mistakes?** | "Are You Making These 5 Cold Email Mistakes?" |
| 10 | **[Big Number/Stat] + Implication** | "83% of Proposals Lose on Price. Here's How to Win on Value." |
| 11 | **The [Framework/Secret/Method] Behind [Impressive Result]** | "The 3-Step Method Behind $50M in Closed Deals" |
| 12 | **[Direct Command] + [Specific Benefit]** | "Cut Your Client Reporting Time by 80% This Week" |

### 2.2 Headline Quality Test

Score each headline candidate 0-2 per criterion:

| Criterion | 0 | 1 | 2 |
|-----------|---|---|---|
| **Specific** | Vague/generic | Somewhat specific | Has numbers, timeframes, or concrete nouns |
| **Benefit-driven** | Feature-focused | Implied benefit | Explicit outcome the reader wants |
| **Curiosity gap** | No reason to read on | Mild interest | "I NEED to know more" |
| **Believable** | Sounds like hype | Plausible | Backed by specificity or proof |
| **Emotional** | Flat/corporate | Slightly engaging | Hits fear, desire, curiosity, or frustration |

**Score: /10** — Ship at 7+. Below 5 = rewrite.

### 2.3 Subheadline Rules

The subheadline expands on the headline promise. It should:
- Add specificity the headline couldn't fit
- Address the reader directly ("you")
- Lower the perceived effort/risk
- Create a "nodding" effect (reader thinks "yes, that's me")

**Pattern:** `[Expand on headline promise] + [For whom] + [Without the main objection]`

Example: Headline: "Double Your Pipeline in 30 Days"  
Subheadline: "The AI-powered outreach system that books qualified calls for B2B founders — without cold calling or hiring SDRs."

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## Phase 3: Copy Frameworks (The Arsenal)

### 3.1 Core Frameworks

**AIDA — Attention, Interest, Desire, Action**
Best for: Landing pages, sales pages, long-form emails

```
ATTENTION: Hook with the biggest pain or boldest promise
INTEREST: "Here's why this matters to YOU specifically..."
DESIRE: Paint the after-state. Ma